... Lary ***The first two lines are zingers..wow! It all works very well..my only suggestion would be put yourself in the picture. How about ' I discover...
their present... my young departing guests linger a while some mango flavoured tea in a silver tin or their present... some mango flavoured tea in a silver tin...
In a message dated 2/28/2005 3:46:24 P.M. Central Standard Time, laryalee@... writes: snowflakes swirl against the window hour after hour his fingers...
In a message dated 3/1/2005 1:01:37 A.M. Central Standard Time, laryalee@... writes: a rainbow after five shades of mourning a grandchild arrives and...
In a message dated 3/1/2005 9:28:26 A.M. Central Standard Time, ... i keep coming back to this, thelma. so lovely! sheila Ah, Thelma, you do write great love...
... are particularly memorable! ... says the same thing as line 4) and divide line 2 into two lines. Maybe move "cradled" up to the previous line. ... Sheila...
In a message dated 3/1/2005 4:53:52 P.M. Central Standard Time, ... are particularly memorable! ... says the same thing as line 4) and divide line 2 into...
This windy night while huddled by the winter hearth something draws my ear. Your footsteps on the gravel or rustle of dead grasses? Norman [Non-text portions...
Revision: a rainbow after five shades of mourning a grandchild arrives I discover again the color of laughter Original: a rainbow after five shades of mourning...
... Hi sprite, mango tea sounds delicious! And I enjoy the warm and cosy atmosphere... a hint of exotic places . I can't decide between the two versions, ...
Carole, sorry I did not reply sooner. The sun's glare draws a mirrored curtain, the stream hidden. When the sun shines on water, the glare hides what is below,...
This windy night while huddled by the winter hearth something draws my ear. Your footsteps on the gravel or rustle of dead grasses? Norman lovely, I wonder if...
their present... some mango flavoured tea in a silver tin my young departing guests linger a while sprite I prefer the second, but wonder if some needed. ...
a rainbow after five shades of mourning a grandchild arrives and she discovers again that laughter becomes her Lovely work, Lary. Again, I wonder at a couple...
what we had has surely vanished with the night yet I awaken cradled against your chest my head upon your pillow -- Thelma If there were a Pulitzer for English...
Revision (thanks, Carole!) snowflakes swirl by the nursing home window hour after hour his fingers pluck unseen lint from the armchair Bow. Gary February...
Inspired by Wang Wei's River Journey In a world without walls, there are no windows to hold the moon, my songs, your voice. Plastic hibiscus petals pressed ...
... http://www.mindfirerenew.com/<http://www.mindfirerenew.com/> ... Hi Gary. Thanks, and yes it is a 5-7. As a certain Belgian gentleman says, "I'm not an...
ribbons of clouds surround the moon in march seeking closure this sachet scent upon my paramour’s pillow an'ya -- No virus found in this outgoing message. ...
... too, though about 'cloud ribbons' and then decided it was too choppy so I opted for 'ribbons of cloud'. Thanks very much for your kind words . . . love ya,...
