... Thank you Carole and Lary - but I wonder whether the humorous aspect has been lost... Actually in my initial version the poem reads a bit differently -...
... Thank you Carole and Lary - but I wonder whether the humorous aspect has been lost... Actually in my initial version the poem reads a bit differently -...
... <sheila_windsor@h...> ... thank you cindy, carole, valeria and gary for your comments on this. i think it probably needs 'great' before 'grandfather'. he...
... From: YR To: Tanka@yahoogroups.com Sent: Wednesday, June 01, 2005 1:49 AM Subject: [Tanka] moment of spring (restoring its initial version) ... Thank you...
... again. ... occurred to me ... have a ... else I ... tarot. ... explains my ... too..*LOL* ... thanks valeria, cindy, carole and michael, i don't think you...
... o.k. i'm only about 3 days behind! lol! norla, i love this . . . both concept/philosophy, which i share (very close to the realisation i'm trying to...
... See ... exists..but in ... long ... can get! ... i 'do' like this one, carole. and how funny the blake you quote has been with me this past quarter of a...
Thanks Sheila. It's something I keep trying to remember each time I sit a fret about what my beloved has just done or is not doing or may be planning to do....
... plexus tanka ... important ... few ... ability to ... gift of a ... this ... carole, thanks so much for your kind words about this tanka and about my...
... <snip> ... changed ... humour ... contrast ... got ... Hi Hortensia. Nice to see you posting again. Expecting new poems from you! No, I won't change the...
... lady ... my ... were ... little ... heart...great ... haha.. ... So it will be "Spring filling my heart..." And thank you, Carole, very much for explaining...
... Yuri, I am all smiles. You present a wonderfully humorous picture: Two people in spring talking / flirting / and their pet dogs doing what pet dogs do...
night lingers when we wish for day shadows remain when we wish for light a spider spins regardless Smiles. Gary The moon shines unseen in the daylight yet...
chariot and page card by card, a cross on the velvet cloth and from the magician's hand there at my birth, my son sheila Sheila, a good read. I wonder at ...
These are both lovely and Gary, I loved your response tanka. Every word carries its weight..the last line so true! A lot of depth to your tanka. Carole ...
reunion . . . for the briefest of moments grandfather visits the face of the child sheila As a grandfather who writes often about his grandson, I find myself...
there's a bend ahead where the road turns out of sight curving left or right my journey ever lies on the road beneath my feet norla A ton written about this...
... hi gary . . . i've just two minutes ago, revised this in an email to my sister-in-law. see what you think: card by card on the velvet cloth chariot and...
Hi Gary, a nice moment here....the feeling of waiting for the sun. And a garden always smells so nice after a rain! In line 4, I thought of the difference ...
Oh my, a beautiful duet! Applause, Lera and Gary! ... Lary Lary, there may be (is) more. Smiles and thanks. Gary Time to read May's FireWeed. Go in through...
Carole, Thank you so much for sharing that William Blake poem. It spoke to me loud and clear. Helen ... From: Laryalee Fraser Sent: Tue, 31 May 2005...
Spring filling my heart as I talk to a lady with emerald eyes our dogs get acquainted too in their artless canine way. -Yuri Emerald eyes. Ah! I would drop...
sixteen to sixty . . . moments of passion sprinkled like sunlight through this old oak's leaves c&c I thought of 'my moments'..but figured it might be...
LOL..thanks Norla and Gary..still revising..will post again in awhile..my oak may go. :-) Carole ... From: Norla Antinoro To: Tanka@yahoogroups.com Sent:...
Your welcome Helen. I have another..I know I shouldn't post it in tanka group..but I only have two that I come back to time and time again...among all the...
