engulfed by the new year after year, radio with broken tuner dust cakes on the glass & steel face a hopeful light still haunts ===== GREED IS GOOD. GOD IS...
... too hasty; apologies: "heart". ===== GREED IS GOOD. GOD IS GREAT. __________________________________________________ Do you Yahoo!? Yahoo! Mail Plus -...
... You wrote an excellent poem. I like that you broke the two section apart.It made the poem more effective or stand out more Have a wonderful a Wonderful New...
Pallor in sunlight. It is early, it is late, It is gloved aspect; How weak the headlights seem now So garish on us before. ===== GREED IS GOOD. GOD IS GREAT. ...
the radio tower along a rural highway -- even now in winter darkness it keeps a steady pulse -- Jane Wilson Marvelous insight and observation. kirsty Your use...
Thanks, Kirsty. In rural areas, radio towers remind me of the lonely frontier guards of Ancient China and Japan -- doing their job quietly, with nothing but...
Thanks, Kirsty. In rural areas, radio towers remind me of the lonely frontier guards of Ancient China and Japan -- doing their job quietly, with nothing but...
Ok this not a tanka, but I thought you might enjoy it,since it's about Christmas.Cathy Snow,color by lights gathers more on the greens. Roads grows quiet and...
another year.... alone with my thoughts of old and new how quiet this pondering heart amidst the fireworks outside gillena To my mind this is one of your best,...
The bullets i dodge count for nothing, nor the day of it marked lucky. Intol'rable that sunlight should bathe me now so warmly. ===== GREED IS GOOD. GOD IS...
In a message dated 1/4/2003 3:36:43 PM Central Standard Time, ... I lost Kirsty's post somewhere but have to agree this is well-written Gillena. The old and...
my oatmeal grows cold glutinous with memories of winters indoors clothes dropped in wet heaps you by my side doris kasson You certainly set the scene...grief...
... gillena, I too liked the contrast in this poem. It seems so typical of the New Year that with all the celebration going on, we get reflective. You managed...
... you come ... kirsty Hi Kirsty, How about "covered, uncovered, turned on".... :')doris Just about what I'd figured! Lucky guy! kirsty Your use of Yahoo!...