JULY A tar-black puppy hunts a snow-white butterfly, each snap off the mark pure joy, no frets, no thoughts of emptiness of existence AUGUST North-wester...
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runok@...
Aug 1, 2003 11:02 am
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In a message dated 8/1/2003 6:03:28 AM Central Daylight Time, runok@... ... Hi Yuri , I like that one...thanks for the background on it. an old tractor...
a stuffed elephant on the top shelf drunk, again she prays and prays without intercession karinaklesko I chose Tanka as my favorite form of writing, because...
I'm slightly confused.. what is the significance of the comma? The first time I read it with skipping over it, for I thought it was a typo. Thanks, Mike ... ...
... first time I read it with skipping over it, for I thought it was a typo. ... To make the reader pause. To stop for a moment and if nothing else, to wonder...
... and lakes ... Actually because ... for ... Hi Yura, I've been meaning to retreat after a brief round of posts but not before I tell you how much I enjoyed...
Ohhh, I'm sorry, haha. I read that as 'coma' .. instead of comma. I see how you mean now. To be honest, I think using coma instead would actually be quite...
I wrote this quickly, I hope this improves some. Carmen ... wrote: hearing fireworks I search the night horizon only chalky lines meet my gaze as high hopes...
In a message dated 8/2/2003 10:02:57 AM Central Daylight Time, sterba@... ... Hi Carmen, good to see you ! I dn't know what the chalky lines are...it is ...
In a message dated 8/2/2003 7:50:02 PM Central Daylight Time, ... Hi again Carmen , I have read this over and over ..and now it appears to me to be an eye...
Hi Karina, thank you for taking the time to puzzle over this. I think if it is difficult to understand then I have not conveyed it clearly. I was searching for...
the coolness of mud burying my feet, now naked I feel cleansed in the still waters of this deserted river karinaklesko [Non-text portions of this message have...
sorry ...did not mean to tack this onto yours....I thought I put in a sep email and was wondering what happened to it...now I see where it is...Karina In a...
i look up just in time to catch the wild geese calling, wheeling south thoughts turn to autumn sheila no one left at the station I say good-bye to a flight of...
alleyway morning calm in my warm bed, i enjoy the clatters of somebody's clogs/john tiong chunghoo __________________________________ Do you Yahoo!? Yahoo!...
after your death I wander through my dreams looking for you these pelicans on the lake drifting back and forth in pairs Marjorie Buettner (for my mother who...
... i dread passing by your favourite mahjong haunt each time i heard the clatters of the game i tried to restrain my tears but failed/john tiong chunghoo ... ...
... marjorie, This is beautiful and so touching! I'm sorry to hear about your mother. May you find the strength to go through these sad times. Thelma...
A gooseberry bush hidden by rampant nettles by the fallen fence I long to see childhood friends in those now broken windows -YR...
YR
runok@...
Aug 6, 2003 7:56 pm
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a fascination that never leaves her - my demented mother watches people trudge home with their bags of groceries the indignities of sickness and old age what...
Slowly fading star Passes behind moonlit clouds Drifting from the west Reverently, night creatures Mourn it's passing in silence. (For my Mom who passed...
... From: <priszm@...> To: <tanka@yahoogroups.com> Sent: Monday, August 04, 2003 3:09 PM Subject: [Tanka] wild geese ... Dark shadows of flyers in...
YR
runok@...
Aug 8, 2003 6:28 pm
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I really enjoy the first one. Poignant yet subtle. Nice. Mike ... From: thelmamariano To: Tanka@yahoogroups.com Sent: Wednesday, August 06, 2003 6:28 PM ...
after days of depression mom continues to paint 'untitled' the dark rectangle around a blue fetus Cindy [Non-text portions of this message have been removed]...
