In my opinion that might be over doing it and you might want to have the phone for only dramatic moments so the final call does not lose its strong effect....
Hey Fiona, I was thinking about your last idea about the phone calls. I have to tell you that I thought your play was good but the phone call was the one part...
Thank you Paula, Fiona and Jay for your comments, I have used ideas from all of you to make slight to big changes in the final draft. I will quickly explain...
Jay: I finished reading your play like I said I would. I felt the play was ultra similar to the original version, with the exception of the end. That made me...
Jay Leppanen Return to Cherry Orchard Characters: Madame Ranevsky ( Lyubov ), the owner of cherry orchard, age thirty- seven Anya, her daughter who is very...
Fiona Zachel Dramatic Lit. UAF Fall 2007-12-10 Final Play Script Title: Bread and Cranberries Cast of Characters ROSE ECHO- A girl 17 years old, and junior in...
I'm not really sure how to post this so that all the formatting will work right... things like page numbers don't really work on a forum post, but I'll give it...
Aww... that's a sweet take on a dismal story. I really liked all the metaphors you used for keeping a family together with baking bread, but I can't help but...
Fascinating. I really love the concept of this play. Wow, a lot of people focused on the fantasy world of the internet for their plays this term, didn't they?...
Hmm... I think you could do without the time skipps (and subsequent set changes *ahem*) by just drawing attention to those eras with diologue. For instance "Do...
I have to agree that I did rush the end of the scene since I wanted some sort of closure and I really wanted Rose, Brian and Jacob to come to some sort of...
Genesis by Jenny Schlotfeldt Characters: The Slave Mirror Ju'dah (male) Queen Pandanoran (male in drag, or female) Genesis age 5 Genesis age 16 (female) (the...
I've tried to incorporate ideas from the feedback I was given, thanks again...so I now have two different endings. The other one is on a different computer,...
Back to Toronto to hang out with the Muppets: First there is too many characters for a play of one act, 13. In connection with that, the play is too long, 15...
Jay: I feel compelled to tell you, that in the future, when you want to give constructive criticism, it needs to be without negative personal comments. Such...
Last draft of the three pigs play. New title. Big Bad Wolf by C.S. Lozano Characters: The pigs should not be made to dress up ass pigs, instead they are normal...
Hey Molly, I know you asked me to give response on the endings so i just read much of the lower part of the script. I havn't read the other ending yet but i...
Molly: Hm... this turned out to be an entirly new play... Fun. I love the last lines !! Hahaha... Sounds like apartment xxx... The rest of the play feels Sam...
Foreplay Fighting Forward A Twisted Modern Romance By: Jessica Knott CHARACTERS: The characters should be similar in ethnicity, intelligence, wealth. Their...
Many thanks to those that gave me advice for my play. I incorperated many of the ideas presented to me and cleaned it up a bit. This is the second draft. I...
Hey robin, I just got a chance to read your script tonight, so i am sending you as much helpful feedback as i can. Format wise i think you can combine your...
hmmmm, i don't think you can ever have too many characters. Look at Shakespeare and his 300 member casts. I also don't think 15 pages is too long because of...
Writing a script is like putting a puzzle together. I've tried a couple of different ways but this is the one I feel best about. Anatoly: on my paper I have...
Please look at the picture,read what his mother says, then forward this message on. My 15 year old boy, Evan Trembley, is missing. He has been missing for now ...
Yes, I know I didn't post the first draft. I didn't have internet access before I brought it to the "emergency class for failing students" on Monday, and...
Actually, this is all I can turn in due to a broken wrist, a laptop breakdown,and other complications. This is my "final" draft. All six pages of it. Enjoy the...
So, I decided to just finish what I had. But, what I had in mind for changes, which I'll probably end up doing over break, is make it all with computer...
30 Minutes in Heaven a "playscript" by Melisa Stoutenberg Characters: REBECCA: An attractive businesswoman of 29, with a husband and two children. She recently...
Dramateatro gana premio "Teatro del Mundo" a la mejor revista teatral www.dramateatro.arts.ve www.dramateatro.com La revista digital Dramateatro,, obtuvo este...
