well brian. i think you are brilliant. you are kind of saying "fuck you!" to this assignment, but in doing so you are saying "fuck you!" to all "organized...
Bar Scene Nar: The bar is smoky. The kind of place one goes not just to forget their worries, but to forget themselves. Although it is a Friday night, no one...
hmmm. emily wrote a morality play abrah wrote a drama brian wrote a farce rachel wrote a sit com and dan wrote a multiple personality play. (as if that is a...
In an office Ethel: Now that we are sure that my device will work there is one thing in our way. Michael: Sir, we need a power source. Ethel: We propose a...
Science vs Passion (Or science and pseudoscience?) by Isaac Paris Michael. a young grad student, innocent and brilliant, with a dark edge. Dr. Ethel Lloyd. a...
ecxuse me if there are parts that dont make any sense. it is very late at night (5:07) and i promised myself id get to bed by 3.. Science vs Passion (Or...
I know the whole audience couging thing brought up a few questions. I thought it was apparent that the "coughers" would be planted. Maybe I should add...
So I've been thinking a lot about the discussion we had on Tuesday about "Death of a Salesman" particularly how we struggled to label Willy a trragic hero when...
Another Bibilical Connection: Emily's biblical connections were very enlightening...kudos. When I read the play the first thing that popped into my head was ...
Why are they searching? He's right there. This play has an incredible plot! A dangerously disfunctional family. A demanding father, a broken mother,...
Audrey Gibson S.N.A.F.U. (Situation Normal-All Fucked Up) This title will doubtless change as the script is completed. Characters Mark: late twenties, well...
In my play there is a man named Jay. He is the neighborhood drunk- one of those guys everyone knows and "loves" mostly because he's there and not doing anyone...
My script looks really horrible in the tiny font on the page at yahoo groups... and its better with the stage directiosn italicized and stuff. so i cleaned it...
This doesn't look pretty so i'm going to add my document file to the group under files as well :) -Levi Betrayal by Levi Rion Ben-Israel Jon – 23, male,...
... so you are ... No I'm just a lazy jerk it isn't the same. Anyways, the stuff I have posted so far is closer to what Anatoly was talking about getting ideas...
woah. levi's play was heavy. woah. okay but the ending came too fast for me. did they establish that their relationship was exclusive? a lot of people get ...
I agree with the ending being too fast, that it the part that came out after being up all night at about 7:30am and I just wanted it to end ... haha. there...
Although Tom has most of the lines and the play is a memory of his, I think that Laura is the main character. Tom must be somewhat obsessed with the life of...
Alrighty, overall I enjoyed the script. Definately a great idea to have the classical wedding comedy. As we discussed in class I think Todd needs a few more...
"Death of a Salesman" Emily Yates I don't think I've ever had my heart broken more while reading a script than when I read "Death of a Salesman." This is due...
Audrey's Script- Insanely good casting instincts (I'm not just saying that because you used me :) ). Your material was definitely relevant to the actors you...
Nathan and Tilly *There is a knock at the front door, Tilly emerges from the kitchen, walks to the door, and opens it* Tilly: Hi Nathan: Hey Tilly: …come on...
Wow, that's good. The characters feel like real people, it has funny moments without being forced or unrealistic, there is a clear progression. It also has a...
good. i like the coughing and the choice of endings. however i think the 2nd might seem a little too, rambo? i guess the action and pace seem to pick up too...
Death of a Salesman ended too suddenly. I didn't like it. I guess the abrupt ending made the play more real. In all the fabricated Hollywood films, Brad Pitt...
Audrey- I liked your piece! i was just confused about a couple things. is Cherry there to see Mark walk out? do they pass in the hallway? for some reason...
Hello everyone! Thank you to all who have commented on my script whether in class or online. Sorry I haven't yet had the time to do so for anyone elses work. ...
